Review Detail of Origin_Saint in Kriekwkwkwk

This book is a really fun read and has a lot of potential for growth. I normally don't do reviews this early but I hope this encourages the author to continue writing and readers to continue or start reading. The Writing quality: His grammar isn't the best but is very readable and even improving and trust me you won't struggle to read and understand what he's trying to portray also the pacing of the chapters sometimes feel a little fast, but most times are steady and you might not have noticed if I didn't mention it. Story Development: I like the way the story is progressing and look forward to future developments as its still ch 16 at the time of this review Character Design: The main characters in this book feel fun and have some depth to them as well as a sensible backstory. Updating Stability: it's 5 stars on that as he's very consistent and doesn't abruptly dissappear without reason. You can know when to expect chapters and be sure to get them. World Background: The world background seems well thought out though u would appreciate an auxiliary chapter with new world and old world cultivation levels as well as another one for locations and stuff Overall this is a lovely book and has a lot of potential give it a try and encourage the author 👍❤️🔥