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Author: Kenny_Kens
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Our protagonists, le and Tyron, are sixteen average boys developing their VR game about cultivation! One day they finally finished their game and played it, but then they lost their consciousness and waked up in a new world... (Just read the prologue) l (Sorry for this lousy synopsis, but I hope you’ll give my novel a try :) (Spoiler alert!!!!!!!!!!! They are get trapped as immortals and then they wake up in a other world!) because I didn’t want to confuse anybody ---------- Btw. English is not my native language so sorry for grammar errors

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I will delete every chapter of this novel, and it will be given a new name.

If you are still interested in reading this novel please look up "Immortals in a other world."

I thank everyone.

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Let me laugh · Eastern
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I'm not very good at reviewing, but here's what I think: 1. the story is very good...for those who like cultivation-isekai-OP type stories I highly recommend reading this. also the story development is quite interesting, starting from making a cultivation game--> then trapped in the world of cultivation (a new world, different from the world of cultivation games made by 2 MCs) the concept is somewhat similar to the story "Overlord", only with a different color. 2. Even though the story is very good, every story/novel must have clarity. why am i saying this??? because the author's story is a story in the form of a cultivation type... then there is such a thing as a "cultivation realm" In the new world, the author tells us that there are 2 types of cultivators, namely sword and martial cultivators. the author says that sword and martial cultivation are the same Sword Cultivator = Martial Cultivator 1. sword-disciple =body tempering 2. sword-master =martial-king 3. sword-grandmaster = martial-emperor ------------------------------ In this line, the clarification of the realm starts to feel strange, if the author checks it again you must be confused too. even when i read chapter 34, the author mentioned that martial dominator is the same as sword supreme. the others also confused me, whether it was a higher martial dominator or a martial sovereign, but in the "instruction chapter" the martial sovereign was not mentioned even though it was mentioned in the early chapters. 4. sword-supreme = martial-ancestor 5. sword-sovereign = martial-dominator 6. sword-monarch = martial-monarch 7. sword-dominator = martial-sovereign ??? -------------------------------------------------- 8. sword-saint = Martial-saint 9. sword-god = martial-god 10. sword-deity = martial-deity (???) before in early chapter is mentioned

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