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the story is original, like really original. the author should have made an original instead of just having a power system and some characters that haven't showed up yet the same as Fate. I mean the power system and magic system can be copied without copy right issues you know... I started reading the fanfic hoping to find atleast 50% connection to Fate series story but I didn't although I only read until chapter 16 so not sure for after that. Anyway, the story is good, but I don't recommend it to those who wants something that has atleast a 50% semblance of Fate series that can be seen in just a few chapters. Also, we all know that medieval times church is brutal and simply villainous they will burn anything that they see as heretical, no need for conversation and explanation, if you don't believe in their god then you should die. hahahaha!
Epic of the Apostate: Heretic
Flako
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Oh this is interesting. I can then create an apprentice that learns from a fragment of his memories as a hologram in the main world. And then the descendants of this student can call him in one of the wars. Motivating the training with the fact that he needs to pass the techniques of the North Wind to the next generation.
Blast_Niro:so you're going the route of a forgotten myth huh I can respect that but that is still a little bland to be honest so how about in addition to the church hiding this legend you could have a group of people or a family that practices magecraft and descends from the OC or someone close or knew and respected him to be in hiding and constant search for a way to bring back his honor or something and while searching they find the holy grail war and participate in it and since they know the legend they should a catalyst to summon him easily without going with the random troupe .
Thank you for your feedback. This is the background of my heroic spirit, in short, this is the first part, in the second part there will be Fate itself, I want to reveal the hero. Honestly, I wanted to make a short prologue, about twenty chapters, but me like struck lightning and I decided to create an original beginning with life, with adventures and many dangers. But I did not leave the initial goal and the hero is gaining strength with one goal, to become equal with the gods and heroes. Battles for the Holy Grail, romance and everything else, will be. Therefore, be patient and wait.
so from what I'm getting you want to create your own mythology and legend instead of writing an MC in an already existing one
Flako:Thank you for your feedback. This is the background of my heroic spirit, in short, this is the first part, in the second part there will be Fate itself, I want to reveal the hero. Honestly, I wanted to make a short prologue, about twenty chapters, but me like struck lightning and I decided to create an original beginning with life, with adventures and many dangers. But I did not leave the initial goal and the hero is gaining strength with one goal, to become equal with the gods and heroes. Battles for the Holy Grail, romance and everything else, will be. Therefore, be patient and wait.
More or less like this, I want to write a legend for my protagonist and insert it into the world of Fate so that he becomes one of the heroic spirits.
Blast_Niro:so from what I'm getting you want to create your own mythology and legend instead of writing an MC in an already existing one
đ¤ what you want to do is not easy but also not hard if you have your bases covered like for example the country of origin of this myth, the timeline of it in contrast to human history and how it's written down in it since we know that servant's powers are dictated by their stories and legend but of course, you can avoid all that pain by just saying he's from a different universe or variation of it like lostbelt of sorts but that is the lazy man's way out
Flako:More or less like this, I want to write a legend for my protagonist and insert it into the world of Fate so that he becomes one of the heroic spirits.
Heroic spirits originated from legends, that is, they received the necessary fame. And what if you become the definition of the word "Heretic" in the Akashic records, in one of the other worlds of the Fate universe? The entire Fate series is based on parallel worlds. And to the question: "Why do we not know this myth in modern times?", I can answer that the church hid this fact, and the Akashic records remember everything.
Blast_Niro:đ¤ what you want to do is not easy but also not hard if you have your bases covered like for example the country of origin of this myth, the timeline of it in contrast to human history and how it's written down in it since we know that servant's powers are dictated by their stories and legend but of course, you can avoid all that pain by just saying he's from a different universe or variation of it like lostbelt of sorts but that is the lazy man's way out
so you're going the route of a forgotten myth huh I can respect that but that is still a little bland to be honest so how about in addition to the church hiding this legend you could have a group of people or a family that practices magecraft and descends from the OC or someone close or knew and respected him to be in hiding and constant search for a way to bring back his honor or something and while searching they find the holy grail war and participate in it and since they know the legend they should a catalyst to summon him easily without going with the random troupe .
Flako:Heroic spirits originated from legends, that is, they received the necessary fame. And what if you become the definition of the word "Heretic" in the Akashic records, in one of the other worlds of the Fate universe? The entire Fate series is based on parallel worlds. And to the question: "Why do we not know this myth in modern times?", I can answer that the church hid this fact, and the Akashic records remember everything.
yeah something like that but don't forget to create an interesting reason as to why they participate in the war that way when the struggle between ideals happens you have something to confront them and even win against them with .
Flako:Oh this is interesting. I can then create an apprentice that learns from a fragment of his memories as a hologram in the main world. And then the descendants of this student can call him in one of the wars. Motivating the training with the fact that he needs to pass the techniques of the North Wind to the next generation.
Blast_Niro:yeah something like that but don't forget to create an interesting reason as to why they participate in the war that way when the struggle between ideals happens you have something to confront them and even win against them with .