Yup I know for sure the system stuff is gonna kill this work in the long run, the mc is already busted as it is but with the added system, yeah the mc is too protected by the author.

okay what? is it just me or is this just some fancy words that don't really explain what his semblance actually do .

yo man check your pov changes.

how about this as an image

I's suggest against it dude, mixing worlds is just a recipe for disaster no matter how talented you think you are, you should instead focus on resident evil first then latter you can cook up something that lets her hop into another verse.

dragon breath really? that's the best thing you could come up with? you could have have picked so many things like dragon strength, dragon form , dragon physique which combines the strength and toughness of a dragon or even fire controle which could lead to dragon breath.

I would've chosen castoria to be honest, while Goddess Rhongo is pretty powerful, castoria is more versatile as she is a fae ( the eyes ) , she's a caster ( magecraft ) and at full power she's arguably stronger than her goddess counter part ( has Morgan's Rhongo spell and could fight her on equal ground which is a feat of it's own as Morgan is without a doubt stronger than goddess Rhongo). ps: and if we want to go over the top you could've chosen the foreign class heroine x as if what she said is to be believed she is easily a star buster.

so my true concern is how far will you take itachi's strength to when canon starts? since we can guess that you will make itachi the captain and can also guess that his bankai will have susanoo in some shape or form but to what degree of power and mastery that we don't know so I hope that his power doesn't exide the plot and story if you get what I mean.

it's still AI and that's all someone needs to not read a fanfic.

this just screams chatgbt bro.

nah dude it's cool, but about the misleading part it kinda is ' since most beings reincarnating people are usually...' can easily be misunderstood as the mc having meet such beings but if it said ' since I thought most beings....' it would make it clear that it's just his own misunderstanding.

how would he know them? did he meet them before he got here? I thought he was a normal human. ps: the paragraph is misleading in that it makes it seem like he knows them instead of him assuming they were like that from the fics he read.

I never said that it was destined for Harry to win unless the prophecy was about Harry defeating Voldemort, in that case sorry about that it's been a long time since I watched Harry Potter, but the confrontation between them would never change so there are that should have the same importance in the og story which is what I mean by my comment and what I really wanted to say is that the thought process of your mc is very poisoness for his character development in the long run, I won't deny that his existence does change somethings but not to the point of the plot relying on only him as some type of divine messenger that descended from the heavens to guide the plot to whatever he wants no, there needs to be a point where he realizes that ' oh so I don't have the power to change anything I want and even with me around somethings never change' that moment of humbleness and realization is a crucial thing to advance his character growth that most reincarnated mcs gloss over.

so what I'm taking from this is that all of this is in his head and not just the fact of things and that he an over inflated ego if he thinks that his existence would change the world that much, I mean destiny is a thing if the prophecy of Harry is anything to go by so some events are predestined to happen and at most the thing that would change is the development that the characters go through to lead to it, which would be through his actions not his mere existence.

feather? when did he say feather

so I know I'm not that knowledgeable about Harry Potter but are spells that easy to use, just will it and it would work, l or is this some cultivation stuff that the author put here.

what ? then what's the point of the other characters, they were already useless with canon otsutskis now they are even more worthless .

what are you on about dude , did you read the same manga I did it was stated multiple time that those with that restriction can't see cursed energy and that includes anything created from it like curses or cursed techniques but those with it also gain incredible senses that could counter act there inability to see them and as for maki yes she got rid of her glasses but not because she could see them now no it's because after her full awakening she could sense them like toji did and as for the slash it wasn't that she literally could see them, read between the lines my guy, it's that her senses were so busted she sense the slash before it came.

standing sitting????

no dude those with heavenly restrictions aren't able to see cursed spirits or cursed energy for that matter ( since you know cursed spirits and techniques are made of cursed energy) they just have busted senses that makes you think they can see them, take maki for example she uses classes to see them and if you want to bring togi then he also couldn't see them since if he could he would've saw hallow purple coming.