Review Detail of Shionokami in Our hidden story

Well, with only 4 chapters it's a bit hard to give a review, but not impossible! Ok then let's start with the review, the setting and the world building are pretty good, I like how you describe everything and the world that you're creating, looks really promising! The characters are also really good liked them all so far, as for the writing, I also think that it is pretty good no mistakes whatsoever just a bit of editing here and there and your golden (but as it is right now, it doesn't hinder the story at least for me)