why did u start over? I was liking how the story was going. ..................................................................................................................................
Tardis_2001
Liked it!
LIKEEverlastingBoner:Your not going to change the horrid sentient Pokemon people part that made the story garbage?
I respect that u want to flesh the relationships and all but can't u just try and take ur time instead of diminishing on the harem? I mean instead of adding one woman after the other to the harem why not take the time and inroduce them slowly and show how their relationship really starts and grows? I'm not trying to tell u what to do just trying to help u. I'm a fan of harem and so I dot want it to be diminished and instead alwys want them to grow bigger. thanks for replying to my comment btw
Tardis_2001:I kept getting caught in a really bad rut every time I tried writting more, not too much will change, the only thing thats gonna be different will really be the harem, its gonna much smaller than what i had planned, plus im actually goinh to flesh out the relationships.
Tardis_2001:I kept getting caught in a really bad rut every time I tried writting more, not too much will change, the only thing thats gonna be different will really be the harem, its gonna much smaller than what i had planned, plus im actually goinh to flesh out the relationships.
The experimented on Pokemon that talk, they were super annoying and I couldn't stand reading entire segments of a chapter about them or their boss. The whole premise annoyed me honestly, it read like the spider man comic's in where peter keeps getting messed with for plot.
Tardis_2001:Which characters are you talking about?
Oh, then i guess you shouldnt read this because i already have entire future arcs dedicated to them.
EverlastingBoner:The experimented on Pokemon that talk, they were super annoying and I couldn't stand reading entire segments of a chapter about them or their boss. The whole premise annoyed me honestly, it read like the spider man comic's in where peter keeps getting messed with for plot.