the real reason has appeared. he was not reincarnated because he was a good person, but because he died without knowing the touch of a woman lol

yeee. those r boring tbh.

and one more thing. the user doesn't get all the information about the devil fruit he ate, only what it manifests after eating it, something i think you touched upon, but i am not sure since i skipped that part honestly. either way, what i want to get at, is that you could have the MC only knowing about the stats and how to upgrade them, but having to figure everything else by himself. that way although we as reader are already expecting certain things from the system, since it doesn't ever vary too much, you can still surprise us by adding something no one ever thought and make it interesting. but again, you do what you want, since i presume you are writing this for the fun of it. enjoy the experience, and if you find it in yourself you want to improve, then take the advice and do with it what you will

Yee, I get that. but sometimes explaining the powers from the get go gets boring afterwords. imagine if we got to know that Luffy had the Nika god fruit from the begining, it wouldn't be the same when he awakened it later on. it's a weird comparison, i know, but I Think you still get the point

Yee i get that. it's also a good idea, since it gives you less work, and you always adjust the amount of damage the MC receives as he grows stronger. meaning that the same attack that would take 20hp at level 1, may take only 15hp at level 2

wait forget it. I didn't see it. i thought it was the description lol

there was no new skill, forgot to add it

of this hp is calculated using the constitution stats, then this should have gone up, if not and is like his state of health, then forget my commwnt

should be 5. he started at level 1, and leveled twice during the fight, making it 3, and then twice more in the ambushes after they scattered, making it 5.

I'll give u a tip for writing. we as readers don't like to be given everything, we like to see things happening rather than having it explained. so next time, instead of telling us how the df works, just show it. have gain exp, level up and gain the attribute point. show us how he allocates them and what he decides do with them. this way, the immersion is not broken, and we still get to learn how the df works... not that we wouldn't be able to guess, given it is a system, and we all have already read a ton of such fics

ara ara? really?

nope, Mito was the one that had it first. in fact, the seal wasn't even created by Mito, from what the show seemed to suggest, though I still attribute the seal to Mito just cause i want to.

she never had white hair, not even in the og, sure it was less vibrant red, even probably more orange than red, but still orange/ light red. but as for the other point. yes, Mito should look old instead of young, unless she using the same jutsu of Tsunade

at least he made himself the weakest as a sort of joke. he could have made himself the strongest just cus he can

?? so Kushina and Tsunade are cousins??? which means that Tsunade and Naruto would be cousins on second degree??

gonna be honest, kinda boring for me as i am not a fan of Yu-Gi-Oh. but that's personal, and as long as the author likes what he is writing, i just gotta accept as the reader

15 and still with baby fat? doesn't that disappear during the transition from childhood teenage hood?

cuck him too 😈😈

cuck him 😈

but also, love the way it just made a complete 180 so great work man