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BlaccLotus
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2020-11-25 01:26

A smooth and well written modern fantasy romance book by an extremely talented and imaginative writer. A perfect book for you who are into romance fantasy with unique and original concept and story. It's nice reading experience and here's my honest review. Positive: - Beautiful writing style and pretty almost flawless grammar - Unique and freshly original concept and story - Interesting characters' design. The Female main character is very interesting individual, she's feisty and funny. The male lead is also equally interesting as he's a typical caring and loving husband, not a typical possessive and overbearing male lead which I found his character is likeable. Their son is also cute and all the side characters are interesting with their own unique characters. - Rich with description. I was amazed at how good author describing everything in the book. The characters' expression were pictured in great detail and everything such as characters' features, dresses, places and etc were described in great detail and rich with description. - World background. It's blend between modern world and fantasy but you wouldn't be confused because how smooth author at picturing the world background. - Author has a good taste in comedy Negative - Honestly I really want to find some minus points on this book so I can give you constructive critique/criticism. But sadly I hardly found any flaw in the book. - Hm, maybe I'll add on the comment section when I find a flaw on this book. Overall. It's great reading experience and despite being a male who aren't into first person female lead stories, I could enjoy this book without any problem. It shows how good the book is.

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BlaccLotus
BlaccLotusLv12

I believe you already got contracted? Because no way this kind of promising book not to get contracted.

Nattychris_22
Nattychris_22Author

Thank you so much for the great review. Really makes my hardwork paid off 😂😂😂

Nattychris_22
Nattychris_22Author

No, I'm not contracted (yet). They haven't informed me though. But you send me your blessings! I take that as motivation 😁

BlaccLotus:I believe you already got contracted? Because no way this kind of promising book not to get contracted.
BlaccLotus
BlaccLotusLv12

Good luck 😁

Nattychris_22:No, I'm not contracted (yet). They haven't informed me though. But you send me your blessings! I take that as motivation 😁
Nattychris_22
Nattychris_22Author

Thank youu ❤️

BlaccLotus:Good luck 😁
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