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Nattychris_22
Nattychris_22Author4yr
2020-11-17 15:47

Okay, shameless author here giving review to my own work. First of all, this not: ❌ Vampire storyline (don't be bothered by the cover) ❌ Not a transmigration story I may be a bit lacking with my grammar and everything, so please readers be patient with me and tolerate my mistakes. And I'm open for any feedbacks to get this story better. I'll also re-read my story, and sometimes if I found it weird, I can add another scene (so please forgive me! *yelp*) Anyway, this story contains a lot of comedy, fluffy heart-throbbing romance, heart-breaking experience. So, if anyone that is ready for a heart attack, please do like and support my work. Thank you 😁

My Future Husband is Inhuman!

Nattychris_22
4.8
58 Chs

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Jessie_Clark
Jessie_ClarkLv13

will you be looking at paragraph comments or just the comments at the end of the chapter? I feel authors that read the paragraph comments as well as the end of the chapter comments have a better overall view on what people find appealing and unappealing about the paragraph and/or the character. this is only my opinion but I want to be helpful. grammar isn't a huge factor in most people's withdrawal from books on here unless it heavily effects the storyline (makes it confusing).

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Nattychris_22
Nattychris_22Author

I'll be looking at both, since I want to know readers' opinion 😁 I'm always open for any feedbacks and comment as well 👍🏻 Hope you like this story, happy reading!

Jessie_Clark:will you be looking at paragraph comments or just the comments at the end of the chapter? I feel authors that read the paragraph comments as well as the end of the chapter comments have a better overall view on what people find appealing and unappealing about the paragraph and/or the character. this is only my opinion but I want to be helpful. grammar isn't a huge factor in most people's withdrawal from books on here unless it heavily effects the storyline (makes it confusing).
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A smooth and well written modern fantasy romance book by an extremely talented and imaginative writer. A perfect book for you who are into romance fantasy with unique and original concept and story. It's nice reading experience and here's my honest review. Positive: - Beautiful writing style and pretty almost flawless grammar - Unique and freshly original concept and story - Interesting characters' design. The Female main character is very interesting individual, she's feisty and funny. The male lead is also equally interesting as he's a typical caring and loving husband, not a typical possessive and overbearing male lead which I found his character is likeable. Their son is also cute and all the side characters are interesting with their own unique characters. - Rich with description. I was amazed at how good author describing everything in the book. The characters' expression were pictured in great detail and everything such as characters' features, dresses, places and etc were described in great detail and rich with description. - World background. It's blend between modern world and fantasy but you wouldn't be confused because how smooth author at picturing the world background. - Author has a good taste in comedy Negative - Honestly I really want to find some minus points on this book so I can give you constructive critique/criticism. But sadly I hardly found any flaw in the book. - Hm, maybe I'll add on the comment section when I find a flaw on this book. Overall. It's great reading experience and despite being a male who aren't into first person female lead stories, I could enjoy this book without any problem. It shows how good the book is.

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Alexandra_An
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Dear Author, You already published many chapters and have great views. Why you don't have reviews?? I agree with my previous speaker. You're doing great job!

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DON'T MISS OUT THIS AMAZING BOOK!!!! Omg the characters are so cute and the story is beautifully written, I have fallen in love with it from the first chapter 😍😍😍 I'm literally hooked by this fascinating story ❤️

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Amazing! It's very interesting. I rarely read a modern fantasy book but this one got me. The interactions between the characters are very fun to read. Moreover, the story is very well-written which made it a very enjoyable experience to read the book. Well done, author.

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From the prologue, I was HOOKED already. It definetly isn’t what you expect it to be, and thats the BEST part. I like unexpected twists and turns, it keeps me coming back for more! I’d say gramma needs a ‘tiny’ bit of work, but don’t let that deter you. The plot is amazing, I’ve only read two chapters so far, but I will be reading the rest!!!!!!! I HAVE TOO MANY QUESTIONS TO STOP READING NOW!!!

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This story is absolutely amazing and intriguing. The synopsis had me hooked and I am eager to read the whole story. Keep up the good work author.

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Dark_SnowMan
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Okay, this isn't just because we Novel traded. But I really like the story concept of your story and how you actually try to put feeling into the characters. This is a really good story, but if I could say one thing to work on is probably world background. I need more imagery from the area where they are. please

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I will be adding your story to my library for safe keeping😍 💕 I love the humor in your story and the way you have the story line set up. keep up the awesome 👌 work 👏

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