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2021-01-19 04:54

Overall Ive only read like 20 chapters and will definitely continue reading this story. Minor grammatical mistakes but none bad enough where you dont know what the author is saying. HUGE harem story Filled with humor and action. Also author i think it would be smart if you were to make an auxiliary chapter thats just a list of all the mc wifes with their name, race, and power, because i keep getting people mixed up lol.

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look up "The Great Master Hyde's Harem List!!!" I got you covered!

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