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Shygirl5700673Lv13yr
2021-01-12 01:04

The writing in the story could do better but if you comment on the story the auther will reply or like it,so if you ever see a mistake just comment it to help the auther out.The auther updates frequently with chapters.Since the auther works so hard leave a lil comment here and there to help keep the auther motivated! They write two stories so I know they must be overwhelmed at times 📝The story development is interesting and I can’t wait to see what else the auther has planned for the book.The charcter design feels a little rushed at some moments but thats just my opion🤷‍♀️(You may like how it is so check the book out.)Lastly the world background is thoght out really well I give it a 4.5 🙇‍♀️ P.S like I said the auther is really friendly and helps if something confuse you and if you are reading this have a nice day

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Magic_Author

Thank you for the great review!

Shygirl5700673
Shygirl5700673Lv1

No problem

Magic_:Thank you for the great review!
Magic_
Magic_Author

just in case you wondered what the world looks like so far lol

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