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Review Detail of Tim_Shell in Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power

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Around chapter 20 and after, Author leaves out a lot of information. The story becomes really confusing. For example, the main character, became a totally different person from chapter 19 to 20(not sure what chapter it was). I feel you did this to rush the story. As you made him into a super motivated individual that is now doing his best from a normal individual. You abandoned all the character development you had on him in the previous chapters. This story is a good one, probably going to continue read. However I probably will taking my leave soon if characters development is abandoned again.

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Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power

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I Am thinking aBout givng the story a go but what ended up happening wIth character development ?