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Tim_Shell

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  • Tim_Shell
    Tim_Shell3yr
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    Around chapter 20 and after, Author leaves out a lot of information. The story becomes really confusing. For example, the main character, became a totally different person from chapter 19 to 20(not sure what chapter it was). I feel you did this to rush the story. As you made him into a super motivated individual that is now doing his best from a normal individual. You abandoned all the character development you had on him in the previous chapters. This story is a good one, probably going to continue read. However I probably will taking my leave soon if characters development is abandoned again.

    altalt
    Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
    Games · Dao_Of_Fiction
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  • Tim_Shell
    Tim_Shell3yr
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    It feels rushed

    Ch 162 Elder Beneil
    altalt
    Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
    Games · Dao_Of_Fiction
    detail
  • Tim_Shell
    Tim_Shell3yr
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    I am current reading the early chapters. Around chapter 20 and after, you leave out a lot things. The story becomes really confusing. For example the main character, became a totally different person from chapter 19 to 20(not sure what chapter it was). I feel you did this to rush the story. As you made him into a super motivated individual that is now doing his best from a normal individual. You abandoned all the character development you had on him in the previous chapters. This made me become detached to the MC and I am sure others feel the same. Also you abandoned the village he had and as it hasn't been mentioned for already 20 chapters. This story is a good one, probably going to continue read. However I probably will taking my leave soon if characters development is abandoned again.

    Ch 162 Elder Beneil
    altalt
    Evolution: A Warlock's Rise To Power
    Games · Dao_Of_Fiction
    detail