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AzagalPlay
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Writing Quality: 3 stars, I saw way worse but with the awkward use of the tenses and the weird sentences you just can't immerse yourself in this Stability of updates: dunno with the last sh*tty WN update that doesn't let you see when was a chapter last updated so I put 4 stars Story development: it's wish fulfillment so -1 star, there are way to much clichés -1 star, this is harem there is so much forced bs and the plot goes at the speed of light and the mc meets only anime characters so -2 star, that makes it 1 star Character Design: I saw really bad mcs on this website but this.... this one is worse: -1 star for the nerf-mc (srsly what's the point of giving him the EMS and instant mastery if he doesn't even use it in dire situations) -1 star for the hypocrite mc, -1 star for the idiot mc, -1 star for the fùcking one dimensional females and retarded males, so that makes it 1 star World Background: -4 star just for the fact that this is a crossover world with DxD in it (srsly what's the point of having DxD, this is just overused and here it's badly executed, can't a single author understand that DxD isn't interesting anymore with the trillion of fics on it ? couldn't he have used Tokyo Ghoul for example ?) and the fact that the author thinks everyone already knows and can immediatly identify the story from where a character is, so he doesn't explain anything at all, he just tells you a character's name and what his background is in this Crossover fic, no other information about the plot at all. Srsly I would put 0 star for it if I could because of my unconditionnal hate of harems, retarded mcs, badly executed crossover fics (srsly, tell me how you plan to make Assassination Classroom and DxD work in the same world ? with even more forced plot and bs ?) reading this is just a waste of time, even Chinese Novels are better than that, in the end I read until the last chapter as of now (ch.12) because I thought the author would try to make the story better with how much bs and forced plot the readers pointed but NO, nothing changed and it even got worse with DxD's introduction. TL;DR: no immersion at all, hypocrite and idiot mc, forced plot bigger than your mom's arse, clichés and nerfs everywhere for no reason, worst worlds mashup ever and worst author ever, don't waste your time reading this 'novel', this is one of if not THE worst wish fulfillment ff I have ever read **: if the author ever gets the Idea to delete this comment, I'll just repost this with a deleted count here: 0

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amaturewriter
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hello....u got any suggestions for bks?

AzagalPlay
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bks ?

amaturewriter:hello....u got any suggestions for bks?
amaturewriter
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books..stories, ff's, etc

AzagalPlay:bks ?
AzagalPlay
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I mostly read ffs but here are some: dropped but good: -Solo King -Sans in BnhA -I got transmigrated and thrown through time -Think before you wish -Reborn as saitama in Mha -Ezekiel, an angel in the multiverse -Growing as a sapling in the multiverse -Akame ga kill: garou -accelerator reincarnated in another world Ongoing: -Forgotten - Villain Deku -The journey of Mew(I'm honestly surprised this hasn't gained more popularity, this is basically mew, having fun in the multiverse, no serious fight, more mofu mofu and mew is a troll) -Not Overlord Fanfic -Carefree days in the next life -Dragon Ball: the true legendary super saiyan(yes this is a bit cringe) -a slime in MCU Other (complete and/or smut) -One thrust man -I have become the goddess of faetoria -In mha with madara's powers many of those are multiverse ffs, I don't like harems that much so there are probably ffs I missed but these ones are good in my opinion

amaturewriter:books..stories, ff's, etc
amaturewriter
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thx

AzagalPlay:I mostly read ffs but here are some: dropped but good: -Solo King -Sans in BnhA -I got transmigrated and thrown through time -Think before you wish -Reborn as saitama in Mha -Ezekiel, an angel in the multiverse -Growing as a sapling in the multiverse -Akame ga kill: garou -accelerator reincarnated in another world Ongoing: -Forgotten - Villain Deku -The journey of Mew(I'm honestly surprised this hasn't gained more popularity, this is basically mew, having fun in the multiverse, no serious fight, more mofu mofu and mew is a troll) -Not Overlord Fanfic -Carefree days in the next life -Dragon Ball: the true legendary super saiyan(yes this is a bit cringe) -a slime in MCU Other (complete and/or smut) -One thrust man -I have become the goddess of faetoria -In mha with madara's powers many of those are multiverse ffs, I don't like harems that much so there are probably ffs I missed but these ones are good in my opinion
Zhanye
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My Book lol

AzagalPlay:I mostly read ffs but here are some: dropped but good: -Solo King -Sans in BnhA -I got transmigrated and thrown through time -Think before you wish -Reborn as saitama in Mha -Ezekiel, an angel in the multiverse -Growing as a sapling in the multiverse -Akame ga kill: garou -accelerator reincarnated in another world Ongoing: -Forgotten - Villain Deku -The journey of Mew(I'm honestly surprised this hasn't gained more popularity, this is basically mew, having fun in the multiverse, no serious fight, more mofu mofu and mew is a troll) -Not Overlord Fanfic -Carefree days in the next life -Dragon Ball: the true legendary super saiyan(yes this is a bit cringe) -a slime in MCU Other (complete and/or smut) -One thrust man -I have become the goddess of faetoria -In mha with madara's powers many of those are multiverse ffs, I don't like harems that much so there are probably ffs I missed but these ones are good in my opinion
Saiko_Rrendo
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The writer of this novel is a Brazilian YouTuber called "Zy" who was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude photos with a minor who was one of his assistants, she was about 15 years old Zy is a bloody pedophile

AzagalPlay
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guys, don't listen to this, someone's trying to slander this so-called 'Zy' by using spambots on reviews How I know that is because I received the same message on another review of mine on another novel 1 min apart from another account here -> https://***.webnovel.com/book/aatrox-a-god-king-in-a-modern-world._14765952406625405 look for my review please report them as soon as possible

Saiko_Rrendo:The writer of this novel is a Brazilian YouTuber called "Zy" who was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude photos with a minor who was one of his assistants, she was about 15 years old Zy is a bloody pedophile
Saiko_Rrendo
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We are not bots, we are people who reject pedophilia, I recommend you search on Brazilian YouTube about this, Zhanye is zy, and he's a pedophile, so please try to find out before saying something you don't understand

AzagalPlay:guys, don't listen to this, someone's trying to slander this so-called 'Zy' by using spambots on reviews How I know that is because I received the same message on another review of mine on another novel 1 min apart from another account here -> https://***.webnovel.com/book/aatrox-a-god-king-in-a-modern-world._14765952406625405 look for my review please report them as soon as possible
AzagalPlay
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yeah sure, you know your post history is visible right ? cuz here you're telling me that this 'Zy' is more than 6 authors who post daily, and this is not even counting the spam from the other guy, so yeah, I don't see how someone could post daily on many novels on many accounts while being human.

Saiko_Rrendo:We are not bots, we are people who reject pedophilia, I recommend you search on Brazilian YouTube about this, Zhanye is zy, and he's a pedophile, so please try to find out before saying something you don't understand
Saiko_Rrendo
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Okay, sorry for what happened, we just want justice, if the law of the world does not judge him, we will, finally, forgiveness for the disorder

AzagalPlay:yeah sure, you know your post history is visible right ? cuz here you're telling me that this 'Zy' is more than 6 authors who post daily, and this is not even counting the spam from the other guy, so yeah, I don't see how someone could post daily on many novels on many accounts while being human.
AzagalPlay
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did you just ignore when I said that you claimed that this 'Zy' was more than 6 active authors or what ?

Saiko_Rrendo:Okay, sorry for what happened, we just want justice, if the law of the world does not judge him, we will, finally, forgiveness for the disorder
Saiko_Rrendo
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I ignored it, because I want to end the discussion, I don't want to fight with any gringo, justice for me is already great

AzagalPlay:did you just ignore when I said that you claimed that this 'Zy' was more than 6 active authors or what ?
VINI_BERTI
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Sadly he is right. He deliberataly exchanged nudes with an underage fan from his Youtube channel. When everyone discovered, he published a very short video making himself of an innocent victim that all this time didn't know the age, besides the girl talking about that beforehand. A short time after, he excluded the video to hide the evidences, and returned to his channel (where he normally judges the misconducts of other people) like nothing ever happened. Now he brags himself all the time (obviously on Twitter, to mantain his less informed fans on Youtube) about the brazillian youtube community not liking him anymore and how he don't give a damn to his own former friends, because he makes much more money here.