Hey there, Tobi here. This fanfic is ok in my opinion but the story is bland, some of it's plot is a little bit forced. Now I only read till chapter 5, maybe in the later chapters it will get better but I'm gonna review on the previous chapters that I read (Chapter 1-5) In Chapter 1 till 5, he didn't mention anything about his previous life situation so it makes me wonder what's going on, what's his goal. It got the "entertainment barely good so I'm gonna steal works from my former world to get rich" cliché situation, not that I hate it but it's very cliché. The golden finger he got is very OP (1 day 1 ability) and I was hoping that the author will make a comedy scene since reading about 'OP guys but with a bland interactions' will be boring. The interactions MC has with other people is ok... but I was hoping for more. Maybe that will change when I read the later chapters. That's just my opinion. It's similar to the other story called 'My Life as Tadano' by Charlotte. That story is good, maybe this was inspired by that, idk. Tobi is done, Tobi never wrote such a long review. Tobi is tired. But Tobi will give this one a like since there's Tobi in it (not the character but the clothing)
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