Review Detail of Knightolegend in Underrated Exorcist : The Legacy of The Supreme's will

Okay so a few things, the begining was alright it was an okay introduction into the story there was some hook bit the pacing and description of the characters was a bit shakey at best. As it progresses however I get the feeling you try to build up suspense and then hit the climax all in one go. Honestly it seems like a good story just really rushed and jumbly, kinda like you cant figure out if ya wanna go on a walk of just a full on sprint. Also character descriptions are a bit lacking and the pacing on some of the conversations seems either lackering or confusing ar times. I get that you want to have a bit of mystery and have the understanding of the plot or whats happening to progress as the readers get further in, which is cool, but you gotta make sure that the readers arent completely lost and dont even have the basic understanding of what is going on or understanding the scope of what is happening. Also the setting of the story itself isnt to clear either. I think the major thing that just needs a bot of tweaking is your pacing and taking your time when your trying to describe somethong. Try to explain it, like your talking to someone who has no idea what an excorcist is.