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2021-04-15 16:54

(Thanks for your work so far) It's worth taking the time to read.πŸ˜ƒ. But we need more chapters It's worth taking the time to read.πŸ˜ƒ. But we need more chapters It's worth taking the time to read.πŸ˜ƒ. But we need more chapters It's worth taking the time to read.πŸ˜ƒ. But we need more chapters Thanks for your work so far

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I saw that this novel didn't have any "real" Review so I'm making one to help you chose whether to read it or not First of all I'm only at chapter 54 so I may make a new review later Pros: 1-There will be 7 girl in the harem or something like that (it may be a con it depends on what you prefer) 2-The MC have a space and time affinity so he have space and time ability which are really badass (he can gain ability when he lvl up and can lvl up his ability) 3-the MC isn't completely stupid (but I wouldn't say that he is smart either) 4- the world has a lot of potential even though it isn't really original the author describes it well in my opinion but there is still a lot of mystery and things we don't know about the second world (even first world we only know about the district where the MC live but the world look really interesting) 5- the system is nicely done and the reason for the XP gain and lvl up is really good compared to other gamer system 6- he won't leave any of his woman behind and all the women will be important for the story (the author confirmed it himself) 7-no ****** (it can be a con for ****** lover lol) 8- there's only a few grammar mistake (I find the grammar above average compared to other work on this platform) 9-the MC become more ruthless later on (I suggest you to read till chapter 48 at least) 10-the R-18 chapter are great Cons: 1-this is a harem (this can be a pro and con it depends on your preference) 2-till now (chapter 54)the MC's relationship with the girls isn't that deep (there's way more smut than romance so it may feel like the MC just **** a woman and directly go to the other but the author said that he will try to balance the romance, action and smut) 3-super mega duper incredibly strong plot armor (not in a fight but with the girls) 4-the MC isn't stupid but sometimes relie too much on the system in my opinion 5-no ****** (it can be a con for some ppl) 6- the MC can be somehow naive sometimes 7-cringe alert So in my opinion I wouldn't say that this is a masterpiece cause the storie still have some flow and isn't that original but I still think that that's a great novel and a lot of ppl wouldn't regret spending their free pass and coin on it (I suggest you to read at least it chapter 48 cause I find chapter 43-48 the best so far there will be a lot of explanation and action) Chika gif cause she's the best girl:

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