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Review Detail of Aeternabilis in Tales of Hiroki: A Naruto Story

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Aeternabilis
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My head hurts from the mind-numbingly stupid decisions that are made in this story and I only got to chapter 2... To name a few. He goes onto a massive ass rant about how he wants to save all the tragedies in the naruto world such as Nagato, Konan, sanins, kushina, minato etc But then he asks to be born the same age as Kakashi... Like wtf? Why would he not want to be born at least the same age as the sanin... Then he gets asked what family he wants to be born into and goes on a rant about how he is his own family. Like are you trying to give me a migraine of how stupid you are? Especially when he just mentioned danzo before where he would get eaten by him. A clan would provide him with literally everything he needs to get strong and protection. The author also wrote about how he doesn't want the mc to be op as writing about op mc is boring and you can only focus on the side characters. What does he then do? Gives the mc wood release, Sharingan and time, space affinity.... like what? The amount of idiocy I have seen in two chapters alone does not bode well for the rest of the story... So yeah, not gonna waste my time. Gl to author but yeah

Tales of Hiroki: A Naruto Story

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Picking_Daisies
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thank you for this review, helped me save some hours in my life

Swachchhanda_Thapa
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Well, the author really did it though. He made a mc with op abilities but zero logic for its utilisation. So all in all the mc is definately not op as he said it would be.