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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv143yr
2021-02-15 06:17

My head hurts from the mind-numbingly stupid decisions that are made in this story and I only got to chapter 2... To name a few. He goes onto a massive ass rant about how he wants to save all the tragedies in the naruto world such as Nagato, Konan, sanins, kushina, minato etc But then he asks to be born the same age as Kakashi... Like wtf? Why would he not want to be born at least the same age as the sanin... Then he gets asked what family he wants to be born into and goes on a rant about how he is his own family. Like are you trying to give me a migraine of how stupid you are? Especially when he just mentioned danzo before where he would get eaten by him. A clan would provide him with literally everything he needs to get strong and protection. The author also wrote about how he doesn't want the mc to be op as writing about op mc is boring and you can only focus on the side characters. What does he then do? Gives the mc wood release, Sharingan and time, space affinity.... like what? The amount of idiocy I have seen in two chapters alone does not bode well for the rest of the story... So yeah, not gonna waste my time. Gl to author but yeah

Tales of Hiroki: A Naruto Story

Daoist693837
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Swachchhanda_Thapa
Swachchhanda_ThapaLv1

Well, the author really did it though. He made a mc with op abilities but zero logic for its utilisation. So all in all the mc is definately not op as he said it would be.

3yr
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Picking_Daisies
Picking_DaisiesLv1

thank you for this review, helped me save some hours in my life

3yr
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Daoist693837
Daoist693837Author

I will shamelessly rate five star on my own story. Writing it is something I like and helps me pass my time. I also like reading what I have written so I can later fix if there are things not to my liking. I am a critic of my own work.

4yr

CodeSpectre
CodeSpectreLv4

This is an amazing book and i love the story and the characters and i hope he does prevent Minato and Kushina's deaths ...It is very well written with good character design and i genuinely hope that the author doesn't drop this...

3yr
Enjoyteddy
EnjoyteddyLv12

Solid so far. Easy to read and understand what the author is trying to get across. Im liking how the story is going and hoping with all my might that he will save Kushina and Minato and not flake like a lot of authors do with some stupid reason. Also handle Danzo on the real I hate how people leave that to fester.

4yr
hostile_fire
hostile_fireLv13

5 stars is not enough for how good this is, I dont see many naruto FF better than this one because it shows that this mc is quick witted and his desire for peace, also the emotional aspect of the novel is amazing, the clashing philosophies of peace and the people and the way you presented it as to how it affects the mc, amazing, simply amazing.

3yr
HK_47_kun
HK_47_kunLv3

It cant end that way Nononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononono

3yr
KxSora
KxSoraLv1

thank you very much

3yr
Idealist
IdealistLv14

I hope the author does not drop this novel. I had so much fun reading this. Just focus on this novel and not wrote another one before finishing it. Good luck and stay safe!

3yr
Erwin_Navasquez
Erwin_NavasquezLv10

It's good, the best naruto ff I have seen so far. I was just wondering why MC is so childlike but mature considering it's a second life. I also want someone be paired with the MC to add a little sweet things. I give 4.8 for now because I don't know update status.

3yr
Simp_Alert
Simp_AlertLv3

This is a below-average fanfiction. For starters, The MC gets the choice of picking what kekkai Genkai he wants so he picked wood-style he hasn't used for the majority of the novel.

3yr
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