Review Detail of Raquel_Jackson in Lemme Tell You A Story

Item: Lemme Tell You A Story
Rating: 4

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Raquel_JacksonLv12yrRaquel_Jackson

I mean, I like the story but it doesn't really have a plot, everything is all over the place meaning that lots of stuff in the poem are unnecessary to the plot. It doesn't even have a synopsis. I don't wanna be too hard on you since you are a beginner it's just constructive criticism.

Lemme Tell You A Story

SuperMario3045

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SuperMario3045AuthorSuperMario3045

Nah bro. I completely understand. It is kind of meant to be a bit all over the place. I just wrote it because in the end, it is just a lil' thing that describes a life of someone imaginary, but may be close to some situations people may be faced with.

2yr

Raquel_JacksonLv1Raquel_Jackson

Oh okay then, I get it.

SuperMario3045:Nah bro. I completely understand. It is kind of meant to be a bit all over the place. I just wrote it because in the end, it is just a lil' thing that describes a life of someone imaginary, but may be close to some situations people may be faced with.

2yr