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Raquel_Jackson

Raquel_Jackson

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I've never realized my fond in writing books, I'm happy to all the time. I'm trying to reach my goal of becoming a great Author and I hope it works. :)

2021-05-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • Raquel_Jackson
    Raquel_Jackson2yr
    Replied to SuperMario3045

    Oh okay then, I get it.

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    Lemme Tell You A Story
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  • Raquel_Jackson
    Raquel_Jackson2yr
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    I mean, I like the story but it doesn't really have a plot, everything is all over the place meaning that lots of stuff in the poem are unnecessary to the plot. It doesn't even have a synopsis. I don't wanna be too hard on you since you are a beginner it's just constructive criticism.

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