Review Detail of kakigori in Daily Life Trapped in a Zombie VR Game

Hi! I'm going to be reviewing your story. I'll start off by saying that it has its own charm? I'll be upfront here - certain things aren't really my groove, so that naturally gets points docked. Nothing on you, of course. It's a personal preference thing. Disclaimer over, let's get into the meat of things. Anachronisms and suspension of disbelief aside, it's very easygoing. Quite carefree, really. It does come off as the sorta thing you'd read if you wanna wind down after a long day at work or school because it's written with this nonchalant style. I mean, quoting old Vines does help out with that a lot. On that note, the casual references he makes do serve a purpose besides being just 'haha funni meme ref 69420'. It's a decent reminder of how this is all one big game and the repercussions of the actions they take won't carry the same weight in the real world. So yeah. Here's my review. I hope it helped you out. I'm not at liberty to recommend stories like this to people because I don't read books from this genre an awful lot. But for what it's worth? Giving this a shot definitely won't hurt.