Review Detail of Luna_1101 in World Dream

Item: World Dream
Rating: 4

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Luna_1101Lv23yrLuna_1101

The flow of the story is good. The characters are well-written. You should be mindful of correct pronouns because it's sometimes mixed up. In anyway, good luck on you work!

World Dream

Blue_Crow

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Blue_CrowAuthorBlue_Crow

Oh... that part... I'm sorry for the confusion. It was actually intentional since Athos was using her real voice that time. However, thanks for notifying me so I could edit the chapter to make it less confusing. :)

3yr

Luna_1101Lv2Luna_1101

Oh, That's why! Now it's clear thank you and your work is awesome :3

3yr