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great level, continue with the work, but since it feels a bit forced and pointless, you should change the age of the protagonist, 3 years and he already knows how to read, practice mana and body training, all that is very exaggerated, apart from the wishes you could nephew it, saying go what it has is body potential not a rapid compression, making the childhood arc last longer and explaining more the world and the systems, such as school, etc., since there are amusement parks, as it does not go If there are schools where do they get all the science or studies they require?

(Hiatus) The Most OP Young Master

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