Item: Marvel: Elysium (Old)
Rating: 4.8
Author: Nidhin_Vijay

Nidhin_VijayLv42yr

2022-05-26 17:23

Yes there are some cliches.. and yes he's got a ridiculous gift.. but that's what makes this fun.. if the author continues in the same pace he's moving.. he can make a fine 300 or 350 chapter fanfic.. but he needs to very careful regarding this fiction.. every fiction with OP MC gets boring way too fast.. you'll have to carve out a unique plot.. greatly deviating from the storyline.. Like Cornbringer does.. this definitely has potential... the wish was unique.. and his choice of powers are different from a standard MC.. so let's see.. and I hope you maintain this pace of updates.. 20 chapters in a single day it just made my day

Marvel: Elysium (Old)

king_frosh

3.8

130 Chs

Liked by 4 people

Replies7

king_froshAuthor

thanks man

2yr

KING_IN_YELLOWLv5

cornbringer dont use cliche too much and he too dont use overpowered from the start for no particular reason.

2yr

Nidhin_VijayLv4

I'm talking about his knack of capably deviating the plot to everybody's likeness..

KING_IN_YELLOW:cornbringer dont use cliche too much and he too dont use overpowered from the start for no particular reason.

2yr

KING_IN_YELLOWLv5

and he does that by minimizing the cliche in the story and making it not a harem.

Nidhin_Vijay:I'm talking about his knack of capably deviating the plot to everybody's likeness..

2yr

Slime_Monarch_SuiLv4

Amen for the antiharem sect member Cornbringer

KING_IN_YELLOW:and he does that by minimizing the cliche in the story and making it not a harem.

2yr

MellencampLv4

Its a good fic but cornbringer writes some of the best stuff i have seen

2yr

Nidhin_VijayLv4

he's the best out there right now I'd say Jordinio but he never completes any fic not a single one so yeah cornbringer it is ..

Mellencamp:Its a good fic but cornbringer writes some of the best stuff i have seen

2yr

Other Reviews

Marcelinho_GgazeliLv10

simply a mixture of repeated things from other works, neighbor of the spider man, gods coming to give things to him FOR NO logical reason, super genius that befriends a fantastic quartet and of course could not miss the super perfect appearance that makes him attractive, literally a lots of clichés together and all this happens in less than 10 chapters, honestly if I continue reading sme doubts there will be some moment when he becomes a woman's slave and makes a harem easily with his super perfect body

4yr

ThePandaCriticLv1

Started with logic but ended up breaking the same logic it's like the author puts no thought into what he's writing. If you establish rules you have to abide by them, for example, u don't want him to be super smart cause he's going to above people and not be able to connect with anyone yet when he's powered up he gets super smart also being able to recall stuff and understand anything he reads...wasn't that you were trying to avoid. Every single chapter mentions the cosmic entity guarding the multiverse yet the Mc does nothing to either kill it or fight. He has all the resources known to marvel n Dc so the only thing stopping him is u the author with your lack of creativity. If you can't comprehend that don't make your Mc so Op that you can't utilize their powers in a way that is not a brain drain.

2yr

t650825tLv5

Very bad just repeat and repeat baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaasd baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad

4yr

MrShark123Lv4

This is a good fic in my opinion I hope that it doesn't get dropped.........................................................................

2yr

Soup253Lv5

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

2yr

DaoistGsSe3JLv1

Отвратительно 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩💩💩💩

3yr

Savitar_Lv5

very good story and hope you continue it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌✌✌🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅🏅

4yr

SORCERERSUPREME_7Lv2

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

4yr

Angry_ReviewerLv13

Welp if you like forced plot, plot holes the size of galaxies and general asinine nonsense you'll love this story. Otherwise run away and don't waste your time on this trash.

2yr

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