Review Detail of ohremi19 in 3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

The MC's internal thoughts were written beautifully. I also like T and I can sense his struggle in the robotic way he is. One thing I would comment would be how the dialogue was written. When it was still the same person speaking, I got a little confused when the dialogue was separated. I thought it was another character speaking until I read the overall context of the dialogue before figuring out it was actually still the same person. It is a minor problem and didn't affect the story at all. Overall the story is awesome and intriguing. Keep up the good work!