Review Detail of Omnitheus in 3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

Review After Reading Chapter 5 Writing in first person PoV with the narrator using romanticism is an unusual way to make a SciFi genre. But the author made great use of the style to color the exposition of the character, understanding the feelings within. It helps that the author has excellent grammar skills which improve its readability. Update stability seems to be okay. Story Development, while a little slow paced for a SciFi, it had a noir vibe to it instead of action. Taking time to introduce the MC's mental state was necessary, but could use a bit the main plot's progression, little by little every chapter. Character design was as intended by the author. Good work. World background is logical. Whether it's a futuristic urban world with state of the art technology, it is always nice to see when the writer uses a logical science behind it, especially when it comes to time travel. Good work!