Item: 3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.
Rating: 4.8
Author: BlaccLotus

BlaccLotusLv123yr

2021-08-18 01:24

The first thing that stands out is beautiful writing. It's very emotional and quite exquisite read. The writer did a fine job in picturing the main character's emotion, as it flows nicely and is immensely descriptive, as personally, I somehow could feel his sorrow and emotion in quite vivid details. Dave Dalton as the main character, is a well-written and quite multi-dimensional character, an interesting character. His love for his late fiancé is what I like most in this story. In short, it's definitely a very good read for those who are into hopeless romance.

3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

Gaureeey

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GaureeeyAuthor

thank u so much for this you are just so sweet! this motivates me to get better at writing and deliver so much more

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