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Jonley_Taniza
Jonley_TanizaLv24yr
2020-11-27 13:34

hmm... this one is just serializing I think but if you read it all the way, you would realized that is was cool, but I just dont want the plot where Shu Feng was completely clueless about the cultivation world. But since he grew up in an orphanage and he rarely stumbled upon some comics, I think it was just logical. And having an ultimate guiding system means that he will guide him though which adds to some funny parts of the story..

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NovelGreed
NovelGreedLv4

Quite naive for the mc but the character design and personality is good.

RoyaLDraGonAsura
RoyaLDraGonAsuraLv3

yeah youre right. But since the plot made him like that there is nothing we could do. But overall, I say that this story is quite good for a 15 year old author like him...

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GreatHeavenRuler
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Hello to everyone. I don't know where to start but I am very happy to know that there are some of you that gave good reviews and comments at my work. . I am sorry for some delay updates since it's hard for a 15 year old kid like me to come up with some plots and ideas for my next chapter. I am also very sorry for those wrong spelling since I am typing too fast sometimes that I even press the wrong letters. Well, this novel is not contracted so it will be free until I sign a contract. But I am just 15 years old right now and cannot sign a contract yet. So feel free to just read this story. I even wanted to put a lot of cool stuff but since it needs a development in the story, I need to take it slow. And the fact that I also need to deal with my studies right now and meet some 'expectations' makes it even hard for me to release three chapters a day. I think I could only max with two chapters but I will try to release in some days three or more chapters if i got an inspiration. I may not or may be the only 15 year old author but i feel like writing a novel is not limited to our own age. I bet that maybe there is some younger than me already writing their own novel. Again, thanks for giving me some good feedbacks. It made me motivated to write moooore!!!!!!! But feel free to comment any wrongs and error or any displeasure you see in any chapters. I still want tto improve and all of your judging would greatly help me in improving my writing skills. In the near future, I would become a better author with all the red inks you used to correct my errors. My path here never ends. I want challenges and some downsides to further hone my being. And I am expecting that from everyone. I am still new so please do take care of me .😊😊😊😊

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