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It's only the first day though, the bodies of the freshmen cannot take it. Some only started training yesterday before the first day and they exert too much stamina and strength. Then, followed by the next day morning.
Woah, there's many possibilities when the MC dominate the dungeon such as maybe he can control the creature inside the dungeon and when the MC dominate another dungeon, he can merge the dungeon together. Also he can maybe collect any item or treasure by the help of the creature inside the dungeon. Then there comes another idle function.
Poor writing quality, next time try to read what you're writing. You guys making the MC a girl then boy. So-so story development, I think it's quite good but you rush the process of writing and it affects the story.
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