I give this story the max score becuase it is something new and intriguing. For once, the mc isn't Spiderman, Venom, or some X-Men guy, and Natasha Romanoff isn't his mindless harem drone after a few chapters. That being said, the story needs some improvement. There are some grammar mistakes and strange sentences, but nothing that is annoying. The author appears to be quite motivated and I hope he improves in the future because he has enough creative talent to write something interesting. This story isn't the best I have seen, but definitely an enjoyable read.
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