Review Detail of MortalLearner in To You, Six Hundred Years From Now.

Read a few chapters and I was kind of confused which made me re-read the whole chapters again. The storyline is good and interesting with that sort of imagination. You're absolutely good at putting your imagination into words. The characters are well developed. However, I feel like the plot is not gripping enough to keep the reader engaged. Nevertheless, you've done a good job so far.