a very good novel to read .... high quality story .... deep foundation .... beautifully presented characters .... a light touch of mystery .... and lighthearted slice-of-lif events .... MC is good enough for starter MCs .... Elf knightness is not foolish girl or justice muscle brain it is a character that have a very high charisma for the readers .... I sincerely hope that you Mr.author will keep writing your beautiful story without running it. wish you success.
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LIKEThere is nothing t until now...MC doesn't have enough confidence or money to start a relationship with women like any average man and the Elf knight feels unworthy of any sympathy from him let alone love relationship with him simply she has a horrible past with her previous masters so she maybe will not mind if he sleep with her but she doesn't hope for any love. for harem ... will until the last chapter I read there is 3 potential members: 1. Elf knightess with inferiority complex. 2. female detective who has superficial relationship with him. 2. vampiresses with Unknown backstory.
ErjasD:What about the romance?
I am planning on introducing romance into the story eventually. I just wanted to introduce and establish relationships with all the girls first. After that, I'll work on the romance aspect. I do love me some good harem, after all. ;)
Ancient_Egyptian:There is nothing t until now...MC doesn't have enough confidence or money to start a relationship with women like any average man and the Elf knight feels unworthy of any sympathy from him let alone love relationship with him simply she has a horrible past with her previous masters so she maybe will not mind if he sleep with her but she doesn't hope for any love. for harem ... will until the last chapter I read there is 3 potential members: 1. Elf knightess with inferiority complex. 2. female detective who has superficial relationship with him. 2. vampiresses with Unknown backstory.
don't worry, take your time to build the relationship with them ... but there is one thing I wanted to know; are you going to make a slice-of-lif novel with some action or dark fantasy with a much more action and adventure?
Brendanjoke:I am planning on introducing romance into the story eventually. I just wanted to introduce and establish relationships with all the girls first. After that, I'll work on the romance aspect. I do love me some good harem, after all. ;)
I'm intending first and foremost a slice-of-life book with some sprinkle of action in between the slice-of-life portions. Right now, the current arc is more action-oriented. But as soon as I am done with it, it's immediately back to slice-of-life and it'll stay that for quite some time. Oh, and also a bit of mystery tossed in as well.
Ancient_Egyptian:don't worry, take your time to build the relationship with them ... but there is one thing I wanted to know; are you going to make a slice-of-lif novel with some action or dark fantasy with a much more action and adventure?
ohhhh... I would love to see this...also at what point the MC is going to develop a better personality?
Brendanjoke:I'm intending first and foremost a slice-of-life book with some sprinkle of action in between the slice-of-life portions. Right now, the current arc is more action-oriented. But as soon as I am done with it, it's immediately back to slice-of-life and it'll stay that for quite some time. Oh, and also a bit of mystery tossed in as well.
Well, it's a slow gradual process but he'll eventually learn to better himself as the story develops. Not only him but all the girls as well. They all will have their own character arcs.
Ancient_Egyptian:ohhhh... I would love to see this...also at what point the MC is going to develop a better personality?
Okay. I've read a few reviews. Author that's attentive to comments isn't necessary but it's a good sign. Plus you're funny and a man of culture. I've been convinced. Let's dive in! Show me your world!
Brendanjoke:Well, it's a slow gradual process but he'll eventually learn to better himself as the story develops. Not only him but all the girls as well. They all will have their own character arcs.
Hope you enjoyed and continue to enjoy your stay in this world - fingers crossed I didn't dissapoint.
Kaihwa:Okay. I've read a few reviews. Author that's attentive to comments isn't necessary but it's a good sign. Plus you're funny and a man of culture. I've been convinced. Let's dive in! Show me your world!
The guy said that the elf has a horrible past with her previous masters, is it something sexual? I am fine with blood and gore but things like that get too dark for me. Please answer.
Brendanjoke:I am planning on introducing romance into the story eventually. I just wanted to introduce and establish relationships with all the girls first. After that, I'll work on the romance aspect. I do love me some good harem, after all. ;)