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Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv134yr
2020-11-07 01:40

a very good novel to read .... high quality story .... deep foundation .... beautifully presented characters .... a light touch of mystery .... and lighthearted slice-of-lif events .... MC is good enough for starter MCs .... Elf knightness is not foolish girl or justice muscle brain it is a character that have a very high charisma for the readers .... I sincerely hope that you Mr.author will keep writing your beautiful story without running it. wish you success.

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ErjasD
ErjasDLv13

What about the romance?

Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13

There is nothing t until now...MC doesn't have enough confidence or money to start a relationship with women like any average man and the Elf knight feels unworthy of any sympathy from him let alone love relationship with him simply she has a horrible past with her previous masters so she maybe will not mind if he sleep with her but she doesn't hope for any love. for harem ... will until the last chapter I read there is 3 potential members: 1. Elf knightess with inferiority complex. 2. female detective who has superficial relationship with him. 2. vampiresses with Unknown backstory.

ErjasD:What about the romance?
Brendanjoke
BrendanjokeAuthor

I am planning on introducing romance into the story eventually. I just wanted to introduce and establish relationships with all the girls first. After that, I'll work on the romance aspect. I do love me some good harem, after all. ;)

Ancient_Egyptian:There is nothing t until now...MC doesn't have enough confidence or money to start a relationship with women like any average man and the Elf knight feels unworthy of any sympathy from him let alone love relationship with him simply she has a horrible past with her previous masters so she maybe will not mind if he sleep with her but she doesn't hope for any love. for harem ... will until the last chapter I read there is 3 potential members: 1. Elf knightess with inferiority complex. 2. female detective who has superficial relationship with him. 2. vampiresses with Unknown backstory.
Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13

don't worry, take your time to build the relationship with them ... but there is one thing I wanted to know; are you going to make a slice-of-lif novel with some action or dark fantasy with a much more action and adventure?

Brendanjoke:I am planning on introducing romance into the story eventually. I just wanted to introduce and establish relationships with all the girls first. After that, I'll work on the romance aspect. I do love me some good harem, after all. ;)
Brendanjoke
BrendanjokeAuthor

I'm intending first and foremost a slice-of-life book with some sprinkle of action in between the slice-of-life portions. Right now, the current arc is more action-oriented. But as soon as I am done with it, it's immediately back to slice-of-life and it'll stay that for quite some time. Oh, and also a bit of mystery tossed in as well.

Ancient_Egyptian:don't worry, take your time to build the relationship with them ... but there is one thing I wanted to know; are you going to make a slice-of-lif novel with some action or dark fantasy with a much more action and adventure?
Ancient_Egyptian
Ancient_EgyptianLv13

ohhhh... I would love to see this...also at what point the MC is going to develop a better personality?

Brendanjoke:I'm intending first and foremost a slice-of-life book with some sprinkle of action in between the slice-of-life portions. Right now, the current arc is more action-oriented. But as soon as I am done with it, it's immediately back to slice-of-life and it'll stay that for quite some time. Oh, and also a bit of mystery tossed in as well.
Brendanjoke
BrendanjokeAuthor

Well, it's a slow gradual process but he'll eventually learn to better himself as the story develops. Not only him but all the girls as well. They all will have their own character arcs.

Ancient_Egyptian:ohhhh... I would love to see this...also at what point the MC is going to develop a better personality?
Kaihwa
KaihwaLv15

Okay. I've read a few reviews. Author that's attentive to comments isn't necessary but it's a good sign. Plus you're funny and a man of culture. I've been convinced. Let's dive in! Show me your world!

Brendanjoke:Well, it's a slow gradual process but he'll eventually learn to better himself as the story develops. Not only him but all the girls as well. They all will have their own character arcs.
Brendanjoke
BrendanjokeAuthor

Hope you enjoyed and continue to enjoy your stay in this world - fingers crossed I didn't dissapoint.

Kaihwa:Okay. I've read a few reviews. Author that's attentive to comments isn't necessary but it's a good sign. Plus you're funny and a man of culture. I've been convinced. Let's dive in! Show me your world!
ElusiveMist_92
ElusiveMist_92Lv3

The guy said that the elf has a horrible past with her previous masters, is it something sexual? I am fine with blood and gore but things like that get too dark for me. Please answer.

Brendanjoke:I am planning on introducing romance into the story eventually. I just wanted to introduce and establish relationships with all the girls first. After that, I'll work on the romance aspect. I do love me some good harem, after all. ;)
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Relhak
RelhakLv12

If you came here for a JP-like fluffy, comedy, slice-of-life novel about a random dude living with a hot elf, then look no further, cause that's exactly what you'll get....... for a couple of chapters - and then it'll go all in on grim-dark despair. Overall, Elf-story (shortform for this novel's long ass title), is really well written. It has good humor, narration, exposition, pacing, witty dialogue, and multi-dimensional characters with fleshed out backgrounds. So, all's well that ends well? Unfortunately, and this is my personal opinion, the story just got too dark too quickly - and theres too much of it without any sunshine (read:fluff/romance/light heartedness/happy moments/etc). This, combined with a beta, spineless, and indecisive MC (who we never get to know the name of), simply began to annoy me more and more. I came here for a fluffy elf-chan comedy story, then I was pleasantly surprised with deeper and darker plot, but then it became tedious reading about a never evolving relationship, pitifully spineless MC, and constant dark-upon-dark developments, where the story is going from one crisis to another. I hope that in the future plot can include some more romance, where Ash (elf-chan) and MC kiss, make up, do gf+bf stuff - and no, don't tear them apart with some stupid deus-ex machina plot machinations the next chapter to prove their love or some other random bullshit reasoning. Keep them together, and have them develop together for the fluff in the dark. In short, fluff is good, but lately too much dark and crisis combined with a constantly spineless MC is becoming tedious to read.

Gehirn_Dabraine
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Slightly confused at what im reading. Im at chapter 205 and literally the world building of this novel leaves much to desire. The premise of the book definitely starts off on a high note but at some point as a reader you literally say aloud “wtf is going on?!”. Theres no foreshadowing to speak of, the mc deviates between natural speech to prim and proper “ye old english” with bits of slang thrown in here and there and to cap it all of… the MC Is the stereotypical beta character who is 90% of his time thinking self deprecating thoughts but “some how” will pull the occasional confidence out nowhere. I find myself asking myself is he weak, irresponsible, secretly clever or just dense. i understand the mechanics of how a flawed character should behave as there are plenty of light novels that have this character motif of weak to strong (i.e second coming of Gluttony, Devils Son in Law, etc) but this MC leaves me literally flabbergasted. Its not a bad novel per se but i feel the MC is tryibg hard at being something he isnt. Eventually i will come back to this book perhaps but for me personally i just think unless you can deal with a typical beta MC who maybe through some past life act of valor (saving a universe, stopping Thanos’s snap, or defeating truck-kun) somehow ended up in a harem but not a harem (as some of the characters are plainly disrespectful or love him for absolutely no reason that can be found at all) that maybe this book isnt for you. Apologies to the author if this criticism is too harsh but im actually trying to temain objective about the failing points while remaining polite. TYVM.

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