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Darth_foreskin
Darth_foreskinLv43yrDarth_foreskin

I'm disappointed in the character of the main character. He should be much more stealthy and cautious instead of just getting into contact with every supernatural being he meets.

altalt

DxD World

SupremGG

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SupremGG
SupremGGAuthorSupremGG

thanks for the comment;) if you are referring to what happened in the second chapter, well, he didn’t want to fight with (spoiler) it was something involuntary that, his power simply reacted to the strong feeling she gave.

MrYamcha
MrYamchaLv4MrYamcha

Its only been 2 chapters hope he gets Smarter

Darth_foreskin
Darth_foreskinLv4Darth_foreskin

This is supposed to be a self-insert, what would any normal person, you, do in that position?

MrYamcha:Its only been 2 chapters hope he gets Smarter
Samelies
SameliesLv5Samelies

**** anything that walks.........

Darth_foreskin:This is supposed to be a self-insert, what would any normal person, you, do in that position?
Darth_foreskin
Darth_foreskinLv4Darth_foreskin

fair enough

Samelies:**** anything that walks.........
YugoWakfu
YugoWakfuLv1YugoWakfu

Constructive criticism is so beautiful to look at as opposed to the spurt of shit from others (👍 ͡❛ ͜ʖ ͡❛)👍