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amaturewriter
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- Godlike MC [ top 10 ] -[ neglect DXD heir FF trope ] neglected by the gemory household cause they though he was crippled and they believed that they couldnt protect him. [ its not like they are the most powerful clan in the underworld, or that they have the connections to 2 of the strongest people in dxd along with some of the most powerful people connected to em]. - C1 MC is abandoned in orphanage like that and 2 FA's come to kill him, he releases power of destruction unconsciously and kills everyone including the orphanage. how he survives isnt explained. he was just a baby. its just glossed over -MC is top 10 strongest and part of shivas faction, no cares. like shiva just had his faction grow stronger by a large large margin and no cares, no reactions or actions of the other factions. nothing -Shiva accepts the fact that a kid is strong as him without a second thought. -As of c3 despite MC spending over a decade in dxd, there are no moments of him using his SI knowledge for fiction, etc [ maybe its there after c3 but IDK, I stopped at C3 ] -MC kinda fks up the world in a big way,[ because of the 3 points ] above and yet no changes. -no exploration, or any new arcs despite MC being in dxd for close to over a decade. -MC just does shit, he is one of richest people, famous singer, its all glossed over. and no one questions it. no troubles nothing -MC wants power but theres no reason behind it. he kinda wants power to not be weak. that it -MC goes to kuho for no reason. if it was to represent shiva, dosnt make sense for him to go considering he is his right hand man. -MC is so handsome that chicks always have to say it. he appears and they blush. Like its a major focus in the bk. ---------------- do what u will with this info. long chps, eng and other shit is all dope, the premise is interesting. -- its bland cause theres no new arcs, if u can do like a couple flash back chps of MC's adventures. exploring whatever he did and the interactions with people

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The Strongest Existence

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O_Corvo
O_CorvoLv5O_Corvo

thank you amaturewriter you always save me from reading those bombs.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

try it....dont not read. take what I said as a heads up. cause despite what it is, its written well

O_Corvo:thank you amaturewriter you always save me from reading those bombs.
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O_Corvo
O_CorvoLv5O_Corvo

Possibly. I don't usually read dxd fanfics

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

O_Corvo:Possibly. I don't usually read dxd fanfics
Dayside
DaysideLv12Dayside

Thanks for the holler. Didn't wanna read something this fucking shit.

LordOfLaziness
LordOfLazinessLv5LordOfLaziness

thanks for your sacrifice....

3RR0R_404
3RR0R_404Lv43RR0R_404

So basically, a wattpad story