Review Detail of Wolfgirl1215 in Origins (By X-Writer)

Okay, where to start? Firstly, I really enjoyed reading this. It is fast paced, action packed, chilling at times, and I really like how the author focuses in on little details to give emphasis to a scene or emotions. I think the story had good worldbuilding elements too, the prologue itself was great for setting out expectations of what is to come in the story. That said, there are a few things I would like to see for ease of reading. Better grammar, ending sentences and using speech marks would really help direct the flow of the novel. I would also maybe like to see some parts of the novel given more dramatic emphasis to really make certain parts of the book stand out. That is not to say I didnt enjoy reading, because I had a blast delving into the chapters. But if I were to give it five stars, those are some changes I would make. Keep up the great work!