⚠️Oh My! The steam! This is a sultry story so far! The chemistry between the two MCs is explosive in nature. The story is slow, but the world build and characters are Extremely detailed. I would suggest editing and proofreader. There’s quite a few past and present tense mixups, and sentence structure issues, but the story is GOLD. Keep it up Author❤️
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