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TheUltimateP1e
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2024-06-09 18:18

Stand Chapter 10: Writing Quality: Mid af, huge mistakes every paragraph, no punctuation, and author doesn't want to improve, but its not unreadable. Story Development: Pretty okay, the story just follows Escanor, and him living through the first stage of the Dungeon Outbreaks while adjusting his living style to his new powers, I like it. Characters: They pretty good imo, some may be one dimensional, cuz they are side characters, but then again, who cares about them. Some are pretty good, like having flaws, fears, facing those fears and/or flaws etc. World Background is just good, as you'd expect, its Solo Leveling. Overall this could be better and could be worse, so its a solid "read it if you have time, and dot if you have something better"

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oh and also its dropped

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