My fellow Daoist's Help me convert Author-Sama into a true man of culture .

he didnt act anywhere like the escanor we love to see instead he panders to the weak and is scared of being seen as to strong how pathetic idiotic even

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very interesting so far seens pretty good for me and the ideia is very unique

I will be honest the start of the story was pretty decent. The powers the mc chose were while not unique but tolerable. The thing that irritates me is that the mc chose to go to solo leveling world and thinks helping people is a hassle. He thinks he should show himself weaker then he is because it would be hassle if people relied on him. If it was such a hassle then ehy choose to go there. He shouldnt have chosen this world if he didnt want this hassle. Whats the point on coming to this world? If he wanted easy and carefree then he should have chosen a sports world like prince of tennis or eyeshield 21 etc. Its like all the people who choose to go to Naruto world and then freak out about killing and the darkness of the shinobi world and start bashing everyone and everything. If you choose a world then you choose everything that comes with it.

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Stand Chapter 10: Writing Quality: Mid af, huge mistakes every paragraph, no punctuation, and author doesn't want to improve, but its not unreadable. Story Development: Pretty okay, the story just follows Escanor, and him living through the first stage of the Dungeon Outbreaks while adjusting his living style to his new powers, I like it. Characters: They pretty good imo, some may be one dimensional, cuz they are side characters, but then again, who cares about them. Some are pretty good, like having flaws, fears, facing those fears and/or flaws etc. World Background is just good, as you'd expect, its Solo Leveling. Overall this could be better and could be worse, so its a solid "read it if you have time, and dot if you have something better"

Good, очень понравилось особенно когда он стал больше.................................................................................................