Review Detail of TediousHamster in The Second Demon

Yo! Shameless Author here giving my own novel quite the high stars but not 5 since its not perfect and nothing is perfect.. Before you dive into this novel.. This won't be a harem, he won't receive a system and won't be as op as Yuiichiro, the OG sun breath demon slayer...though he will be powerful as ****! The world is already there and the characters are already set, it's a fanfic, what do you expect.. Although, many things will change in the canon due to our mc's action And the moon demons will be my oc's..some of them, not all of them.. Do give constructive reviews and comments bout the story and please go easy on me, my heart is soft and weak...your choice tho Alright enough reading my review, go read the fanfic now and enjoy it