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El_Masturbatoor
El_MasturbatoorLv53yrEl_Masturbatoor

its pretty good but it could do better, right now its good but the only thing i have a problem is that the mc isnt described properly and that the only thing i know about him is his white hair and yellow cat like eyes and that he is 18, not to mention the occasional name mistake that instead of jason theres Geralt or some, its pretty good just confusing so if your the type who doesnt like that kind of thing you can just go. anyhoo, i just reviewed cuz its a GOT but yeah, gotta go crusade now

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Surgebinder in Game of Thrones

Plagued666

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Plagued666
Plagued666AuthorPlagued666

I wanted to make Geralt and made 40 chapters but then decided to change it.

El_Masturbatoor
El_MasturbatoorLv5El_Masturbatoor

nah its fine but since you answered, the mc is a mix of Geralt and a surgebinder correct ? cuz it would be cooler that way honestly and would make the image of the mc clearer

Plagued666:I wanted to make Geralt and made 40 chapters but then decided to change it.
Plagued666
Plagued666AuthorPlagued666

yes

El_Masturbatoor:nah its fine but since you answered, the mc is a mix of Geralt and a surgebinder correct ? cuz it would be cooler that way honestly and would make the image of the mc clearer
Memoulisous_23
Memoulisous_23Lv4Memoulisous_23

This is a stolen story

El_Masturbatoor:nah its fine but since you answered, the mc is a mix of Geralt and a surgebinder correct ? cuz it would be cooler that way honestly and would make the image of the mc clearer
Memoulisous_23
Memoulisous_23Lv4Memoulisous_23

The orginal is called the white wolf of westeros on fanfiction.net

Memoulisous_23:This is a stolen story
El_Masturbatoor
El_MasturbatoorLv5El_Masturbatoor

thx gonna read that and this too, since this is supposed to be a different version

Memoulisous_23:The orginal is called the white wolf of westeros on fanfiction.net
grimmhorizon
grimmhorizonLv14grimmhorizon

YOU MEAN YOU COPIED AND PASTED AND TWINKED A BIT BUT FORGOT TO REMOVE "GERALT"

Plagued666:I wanted to make Geralt and made 40 chapters but then decided to change it.