its pretty good but it could do better, right now its good but the only thing i have a problem is that the mc isnt described properly and that the only thing i know about him is his white hair and yellow cat like eyes and that he is 18, not to mention the occasional name mistake that instead of jason theres Geralt or some, its pretty good just confusing so if your the type who doesnt like that kind of thing you can just go. anyhoo, i just reviewed cuz its a GOT but yeah, gotta go crusade now
Plagued666
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LIKEnah its fine but since you answered, the mc is a mix of Geralt and a surgebinder correct ? cuz it would be cooler that way honestly and would make the image of the mc clearer
Plagued666:I wanted to make Geralt and made 40 chapters but then decided to change it.
El_Masturbatoor:nah its fine but since you answered, the mc is a mix of Geralt and a surgebinder correct ? cuz it would be cooler that way honestly and would make the image of the mc clearer
El_Masturbatoor:nah its fine but since you answered, the mc is a mix of Geralt and a surgebinder correct ? cuz it would be cooler that way honestly and would make the image of the mc clearer
Memoulisous_23:The orginal is called the white wolf of westeros on fanfiction.net
Plagued666:I wanted to make Geralt and made 40 chapters but then decided to change it.