Writing: 3 Updating: 1 Development: 3 Character: 3 Background: 4 (é bem ruim considerando que o efeito borboleta foi ignorado... mas eu gosto) you've improved your writing (although it's still hard to read), and the conversations and plots are very unrealistic... but better than nothing to pass the time Overhal: 2,8
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