Review Detail of Thereviewer48 in The Red Pill

Writing Quality: 3.5/5 (rounds to 4) There are mistakes in writing that can be fixed by rereading the story. Update Stability: 5/5 I put that for everyone. Story Development: 3.5/5 (rounds to four) Your pacing is good and I like the plotline, but I don't really feel the thriller part at all. Character Design: 3.5/5 (round to four) I feel like I don't know enough about your MC, but your characters are nice, and I do enjoy the MC. World Background: 3/5 I feel that there isn't enough background details about your world. It is nice, but I still feel things missing. You are going at a good pace, hopefully more details will added as you continue. Keep up the good work!