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Aysel_Inara
Aysel_InaraLv104yr
2021-01-22 03:35

Let's begin the session. - The narration quality....believe me it's among the bunch of 5 fine books in FL I've seen so far. If you're reluctant to read originals (like me) don't hesitate with this one. - Title exactly portrays the storyline, which has 3 people and a ghost (as per synopsis I've inferred) What's more intriguing is the personality of Ben (referring from chapter 4) is worth loving. - Talking about Scarlett she seems to be 2nd character with Ben being main lead, as far I've predicted it appears to be a paranormal story with tinges if horror which might turn into a detective tale (well, might be solo) Overall, up to first 4 chapters it kept me hooked though I'm not a fan of horror but this had more mystery imbued comparatively plain paranormal stories. - Will do another review soon, just don't drop this work author. It deserves attention and features in true sense, due to deviation of themes from famous works on WN and having absolutely good grammar.

WHEN DEATH DOES US APART

Glimmy
5.0
159 Chs

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Glimmy
GlimmyAuthor

Thanks so much honey, really appreciate it. The character migrated from my other book, "The she-devil and her alpha's" Ben was quite a funny, funky, creepy character and people loved he so much - with his weird powers and then I thought to create a stand alone story for him. And no, I haven't dropped the book, I'll completing my both books so I can make time and start - ugh stress. All in all, thanks so much for the review

4yr
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Aysel_Inara
Aysel_InaraLv10

I'll be reading further soon. Still have this saved.❤ Me lovey Ben~

Glimmy:Thanks so much honey, really appreciate it. The character migrated from my other book, "The she-devil and her alpha's" Ben was quite a funny, funky, creepy character and people loved he so much - with his weird powers and then I thought to create a stand alone story for him. And no, I haven't dropped the book, I'll completing my both books so I can make time and start - ugh stress. All in all, thanks so much for the review
4yr
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Hiii overall superb job with the story! Here were just some of my initial thoughts, but I tend to be a bit nit-picky, so please take everything with a grain of salt! Writing Quality (5/5): There were super minimal grammatical errors, and it was clear that you had proofread all of the chapters! I know it sounds like a super simple thing, but honestly it's so rare on Webnovel that reading your novel was a breath of new air! In particular, I really love how you adapted your tone depending on the given chapter (like the intensity and the romance!) Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to be said there. Story Development (4/5): This was the only category I docked off for, but only because I thought it was a bit confusing jumping from portion to portion. Especially, I had been super looking forward to what had happened after a super exciting first chapter, and it was a bit confusing for me as to how we jumped from point A to point B. I totally understand that it was just the narration, but there did appear to be gaps in my understanding as the story progressed. Especially, the trips down memory lane were not immediately clear to me in terms of chronological advancement until I read a bit further. Character Design (5/5): Pretty well-crafted characters, each with their own personalities and aspirations. World Background (5/5): You gave detailed enough explanations as to make me understand their situations, which I appreciate. All in all, good luck and keep on writing!

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Another review from me, I've seen others do it so what? Anyway, you should all know this MC is different from the others, so don't come expecting a fluffy romance, no, that's not for this book

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Hi lovely readers, it's me Glimmy Reviewing my own book, yep, I get it. Anyway, this book is a spinoff from my other book, "The She-devil and her alphas," but then it's a standalone as well, you don't have to read the other to understand it. But it would be well satisfying to read both as well.

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