Hiii overall superb job with the story! Here were just some of my initial thoughts, but I tend to be a bit nit-picky, so please take everything with a grain of salt! Writing Quality (5/5): There were super minimal grammatical errors, and it was clear that you had proofread all of the chapters! I know it sounds like a super simple thing, but honestly it's so rare on Webnovel that reading your novel was a breath of new air! In particular, I really love how you adapted your tone depending on the given chapter (like the intensity and the romance!) Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to be said there. Story Development (4/5): This was the only category I docked off for, but only because I thought it was a bit confusing jumping from portion to portion. Especially, I had been super looking forward to what had happened after a super exciting first chapter, and it was a bit confusing for me as to how we jumped from point A to point B. I totally understand that it was just the narration, but there did appear to be gaps in my understanding as the story progressed. Especially, the trips down memory lane were not immediately clear to me in terms of chronological advancement until I read a bit further. Character Design (5/5): Pretty well-crafted characters, each with their own personalities and aspirations. World Background (5/5): You gave detailed enough explanations as to make me understand their situations, which I appreciate. All in all, good luck and keep on writing!
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Thank you so much, this was what I needed 😘😘
np! super interesting story btw! ^-^
