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Crazy_Lina
Crazy_LinaLv44yr
2021-03-15 20:36

Hello👋👋👋author i really like this novel it’s so interesting for me because i read some other novels like this but this is the only novel that has mysteries cultivation fantasy and all that and a little bit fluff so thank you for such an amazing novel😊😊 thank you for your hard work

What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]

Cherlyswan
4.8
291 Chs

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Cherlyswan
CherlyswanAuthor

Thank you for reading!

4yr
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Cherlyswan
CherlyswanAuthor

If you are thinking about reading this book just go for it and see if it fits your taste. Since I'm the writer I'll just say that I personally love it, So worth your time. We are twenty chapters in and I've decided to shamelessly give myself a five star because I'm a fan of myself keke... The story deals with a lot of elements ranging from fantasy to mystery to cultivation and even a bit of horror. If you don't like the book you are free to curse the author all you like. Lol

4yr

ForeverPupa
ForeverPupaLv14

OMG! I love this one! Mastermo is a sharp witted top player, and I love his partner, devilmagiclover, aka Li Ling! Great job author! I want more!

4yr
SBLover19
SBLover19Lv3

Dear author, First I want to thank you for this amaxing story and I hope you are always motivated to write stories. If your not then we your readers are here to motivate you. Hope yoi aren't pressured into writing ustj remember to enjoy it and feel the thrill whenever you write stories. Just want to say I appreciate this New concept of Gaming Novel especially because it's BL and this kind of stories are hard to make for writers and hard to find for us readers. Thank youand God Bless you😘😘😘 For the readers I won't say any spoilers except that it's good and I'd recommend it for everyone to read 😊Thank you😘😘😘

4yr
saranghi
saranghiLv4

So I just read the first chapter and honestly it was really well written and amazing. It kept me interested. looking forward to reading the further chapters. please keep on uploading.

4yr
Mlake_Kald
Mlake_KaldLv2

Oh, my God, I read the first chapter, I liked it so much, I really recommend reading it.I love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love

4yr
WeirdPandaPerson
WeirdPandaPersonLv11

normally I wouldn't read novels because well I like art but I realy enjoy this novel, I am currently at chapter 31 and I love the way theres alot of intresting things, I love the novel and I hope you do too and sorry I'm bad at explaining things.

4yr
SBLover19
SBLover19Lv3

When you see the description of the story it's so cliche but when you read the chapters it's so interesting and funny especially the MC's attitude. This story makes me want to be a gamer so I won't be abused by this dog food story😂😂😂

4yr
anu_malu
anu_maluLv2

OMG! OMG! OMG! I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHHHHHH! I'm a fan of this author and made a Webnovel account just to read this book. It's so greatttt!! I love the characters and the story. This is the most different BL novel I have ever read. It focuses on the story with every new level they play giving us new and amazing things. I can never guess what's going to happen next and it's mindblowing. Thank you author-nim!!! I hope Li Ling is the Gamemaster. I'll really cry if he's not T-T

4yr
Thereviewer48
Thereviewer48Lv1

Writing Quality: 2/5 Your writing style is good, there is nothing wrong with it, but the grammar makes everything drop. There are problems with missing commas, capitalization, wording, and punctuation. Also, this is my personal preference, but some paragraphs are too long and should be shortened. Updating Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone because people have lives and not everyone can update daily. Plus, I never pay attention to this. Story Development: 3.5/5 (but I will have to put 4 on the thing). I like the way you tell your story; it's good, but some stuff seems too fast-paced while slow-paced at the same time. The flow would throw me off when the commentators would talk, because it does not give an indication when they start. But other than that, the plot development is not bad. Character Design: 4/5 I like your characters and they way they interact, especially the MC and his brother. Although, the interactions could come off as forced a few times, they are still interesting. You did a good job on developing your characters. World Background: 5/5 You gave a clear view of your background; very descriptive and clear. The changing of gaming settings/scenes are a bit of a flow disruptor, but it is unique and I like it. All in all, the main thing that needs to be improved on is grammar, especially in chapter one (the P.O.V in chapter one was confusing too). Other than that, you are on the right road. Keep up the good work, author!

4yr
Mollyballsoup
MollyballsoupLv15

Quite an interesting take on both gaming and transmigration genres! The book is an appropriate Length it doesn’t Keep you hanging with winded plot points but our secondary MCs apparently Have a sequel Based on them with a continuation to most of the unanswered plot twists! All fluff and nothing pg-13 romance wise fyi.

3yr
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