Story is above the avarage grammatically, for what I usually read, and above all else, it's got potential, but I would like to see more struggle for the MC, even if its Wish Fulfillment, it might get boring pretty fast, but so far, so good. Only problem so far, is the fact that the name Soren no longer feels unique, now that everyone is using it, but that's okay. Good Luck Author-kun, and I hope you make quick releases.
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