and finally the 8th fanfiction on this website that uses lightning fruit. I hate this fruit with a passion because every onepice fanfiction that I see on this website always has it. There are so many amazing fruits like laws for instance. why do people continue with the same one that I will never know because the powers of definitely the same.

the translation feels like you just put the original language through a google translate, while the concept of Rowen's background is missing. where is the chapter explaining how Rowen got into the one piece world, and why was he sent there. also, there is no transitions between scenes, I gave up trying to understand this story when Rowen crashed into the ship from the sky, then he got full on food, but it wasn't stated when he got food. I feel like the reviews here are just bot reviews, so here is an actual review.

I don’t get the people that say this translation is good. Yes it’s in english but it’s barely readable. Half of the time i don’t know what’s going on. The premise is interesting but the translation ruins it for me.

Typical Chinese one-piece story, a man is reincarnated with a powerful ability, then learns to use the sword, spends much of the story training, and then goes to sea to prove he has the biggest member with no other solid purpose to be strong for no reason and that's it.

a good translation, I wait so long for this, thanks to you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It was good until I got to chapter 232 and the mc went crazy for no reason and wanted to take over the world by getting rid of garp and most of the marines power house and yonko.

Make one piece a xianxia novel all it needs is cultivation._.....______........._____________..................______________________________............................................________________

i don't know if it is only for the first few chapters but I think if you translate something you also have to adapt the structure of the sentences. Because overall they seem kinda like a mess which makes it difficult to read.

It's an interesting and awesome story, a Marine story gives a new perspective on reading FanFictions. Question tho, Is there any romance? I know it's just a translated novel.