Promising beginning. The author is playful and creative with the storyline which is entertaining. The protagonist is interesting so far, although she seems invisible at this point; I'm sure she will develop challenges in the future. Would like a little more world building, but the story is self contained at this point. Can't wait to see the connection to the summary! Keep up the good work!
WinterLeaf
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