Stix_and_Fish
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Promising beginning. The author is playful and creative with the storyline which is entertaining. The protagonist is interesting so far, although she seems invisible at this point; I'm sure she will develop challenges in the future. Would like a little more world building, but the story is self contained at this point. Can't wait to see the connection to the summary! Keep up the good work!
There are a few people from each big family. Vorden took a fire ability from a student on the orange ring planet who was part of the big 4, but still pretty weak. Quinn probably doesn't think he went all the way to the top.